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eiman |
04/11/02 at 13:10:54 |
[slm] hope you guys like this.....there's a famous quote that goes ~Modesty is the beauty of the woman~ not sure who said it, but it inspired the following.... :-) In the obscurity of the night The blazing flames conspire Her shadows continue to play In the shape of his burning desire Day upon day she dances Yet coveted by her shield They know they cannot touch her For her boundless beauty is sealed He longs to rest his fingers And expose what lies inside Yet the threat of her kindling crackle Urges his desire to subside She flutters in the moonlight Her flames gracefully prance Never exposing the secret beneath Her eternal elegant dance As the night begins to darken He sees her in his dreams Her movement ignites his hunger He realizes nothing’s the way it seems… What was once a glowing ember Becomes a fervent fire Always bewildering the curious onlookers while letting her flames surge higher... Feel free to play 'critic'... :) [wlm] |
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se7en |
04/11/02 at 13:33:44 |
[quote]Her movement ignites his hunger [/quote] as salaamu alaykum, daaaaaang woman.. a little more than g-rated wouldn't you say ;) they need that 'blush smiley' from instant messenger on here :) hehe.. [unless the woman is a metaphor for something? I'm a little slow so I might have missed that..hmm..] but I'm impressed mashaAllah :) You should post up more of your stuff!! |
04/11/02 at 13:42:11 |
se7en |
Re: desert rose.... |
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eiman |
04/11/02 at 20:20:06 |
[slm] LOL g-rated? WHAT WERE YOU READING INTO? As far as I'm concerned... it was a poem about a fire.... *cough cough*... so uh,...ahem.... YEAH. :) but I'm glad you liked it .... :) lol jazak Allahu kheir.... take care, serenity |
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Aneesa_A. |
04/12/02 at 13:54:51 |
[slm] that was really good serenity!! :) MashaAllah! [wlm] :-) |
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zomorrud |
04/13/02 at 22:55:23 |
assalamu alaikum serenity, the title of your poem is a actually song by sting! i love that song. was it an inspiration for your composition? |
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eiman |
04/14/02 at 19:55:54 |
YES YES YES :) it certainly was an inspiration. That song is one of my favorites...*although im staying away from discussing pop culture on here lol*.... I'm almost certain that in that song, he talks about a hijabi.... and yes, it definitely was inspiration to write that... :) |
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