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se7en
05/10/03 at 11:40:26

as salaamu alaykum wa rahmatullah,

This is a nice poem someone shared with me recently :)
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sitaaro.n se aage jahaa.N aur bhii hai.n
abhii ishq ke imtihaa.N aur bhii hai.n

[i]There is a world beyond the stars
There are more tests in life yet to come[/i]


taayii zindagii se nahii.n ye fazaaye.n
yahaa.N saika.Do.n kaaravaa.N aur bhii hai.n

[i]The weathers/atmosphere is not tied to this life/phase
there are thousands of  caravans in this life yet to come[/i]


kanaa'at na kar aalam-e-rang-o-bu par
chaman aur bhii, aashiyaa.N aur bhii hai.n

[i]Don’t be satisfied with this life of fragrance and color
There are many more gardens , many more skies yet to come[/i]


agar kho gayaa ek nasheman to kyaa Gam
maqaamaat-e-aah-o-fugaa.N aur bhii hai.n

[i]Don’t be sad that one nest is lost
There many more pains and laments yet to come[/i]


tuu shahii.n hai parwaaz hai kaam teraa
tere saamane aasmaa.N aur bhii hai.n

[i]You are an eagle your job is to fly
there are many more skies in front of you yet to come[/i]


isii roz-o-shab me.n ulajh kar na rah jaa
ke tere zamiin-o-makaa.N aur bhii hai.n

[i]Do not get lost in the mundane of this life
there are many more lands many more destinations yet to come[/i]

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Re: Iqbal
muahmed
05/10/03 at 15:26:20
[slm] ;-)

Iqbal is my fav poet! I once thought about translating his "shikwa" (complain) and "jawabi-shikwa" (reply to complain) to English. Shikwa is about a Muslim asking Allah why after so many sacrifices by Muslims are Muslims in such a terrible condition and jawabi-shikwa is a what Iqbal thinks could be a possible reply from Allah on such a question.

However, so much is lost in translation that I feel it would be an injustice to the great poet to attempt to translate his work into English. Just remembered a few his shairs (unit of 2 lines in urdu poetry).

1)
ju kabhi sar-basajda hu-wa mein tu zameen say ani lagi sada
taira dil tu hai sanam-ashna, tujhe kya milay ga namaaz mein

If I ever prostrated, a voice would come from the earth
"Your heart is full of idols, what will you find in prayer?"


2)
zai-raane-kaaba say iqbal yey poochay koi
kya haram ka tuhfa zamzam kay siwa kutch be nahin

From visiters of kaaba, Iqbal one should ask,
Is the gift from the haram, nothing but some zam-zam?
(May Allah help us all, so that the only benefit from our journey to the haram is not just some zam-zam, but an increased iman as well)


3)
tum mein horoon ka chahnay wala hi nahin
jalwa-e-toor tu mojood hai, musa hi nahin

There is none amongst you, who loves the hoors
The blessings at toor are still present, but the like of Musa is not
(toor is reference to the mountain with Musa used to talk to Allah)


4)
aaj bhi ho agar ibrahim ka iman paida
aag kar sakti hai andaaz-e-gulistan paida

Even today if the iman of Ibrahim is born
The fire can bring forth a flower bed


5)
yoon tu syed bhi ho, mirza bhi ho, afghan bhi ho
tum sabhi kutch ho, batao kay musalman bhi ho

You are Syed, and Mirza and Afghan as well
You are everything, but say are you Muslim as well?


(arrghh I can't stop! more and more of his poetry keeps coming back to me)

rasam reh gaye rooh-e-balali na rahi
falsafa reh gaya, talkeen-e-ghazali na rahi

The tradition is left, the spirit of Balal is gone
The philoshophy is left, the advice of al-Ghazali is gone
(first line is reference to adhan)


Re: Iqbal
a_Silver_Rose
05/11/03 at 01:05:52
[slm]
I love his poems! Keep it coming...
This was translated by Brother Siddiqui :)



[color=Teal]lab pe aatii hai duaa banake tamannaa merii
zindagii shammaa kii surat ho Khudaayaa merii

the dua comes to my lips like a wishful thought
let my life be bright like a lamp

(shama=lamp/Light)

ho mere dam se yuu.N hii mere watan kii ziinat
jis tarah phuul se hotii hai chaman kii ziinat  

let my efforts be a part of my  countrys/ummhas beauty
just like flowers whch are the beauty of gardens
(chaman=gardens zeenath = beauty)


zindagii ho merii parawaane kii surat yaa rab  
ilm kii shammaa se ho mujhako mohabbat yaa rab

Let my life be like aparwana (inscet that is attracted to light)
let me be attracted to the light of knowledge


ho meraa kaam Gariibo.n kii himaayat karanaa  
dard-ma.ndo.n se zaiifo.n se mohabbat karanaa
 
let helping the poor be my work
let me be sympathetic to the opressed/heart broken and old

mere allaah buraaii se bachaanaa mujhako
nek jo raah ho us raah pe chalaanaa mujhako
 
Oh my allah please keep me away from bad things  
please keep me on the straight path _Ameen

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05/11/03 at 22:35:51
a_Silver_Rose
Re: Iqbal
Musafir
05/12/03 at 04:10:53
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Quite a influential personality to discuss, as his thoughts and concepts are more relevant today then ever before. They point out our weakness and not only that but show us the way to reconstruct out religious believes.

I don’t want to end the topic but his last words have a very, very touching as well as a hopeful look towards future and probably today’s modern generation - & probably he was counting on the youth generation of Islam to lead the way.

The departed melody may return or not!

The zephyr from Hijaz may blow again or not!

The days of this Faqir has come to an end,

Another seer may come or not!

[wlm]
Re: Iqbal
a_Silver_Rose
05/12/03 at 16:07:25
[slm]

Can you also put the urdu part too plz.
Re: Iqbal
Shakira
05/13/03 at 07:22:49
[slm]  :)
I really like reading ur poems .I barely understand Urdu but its such a sweet language! Keep up the good work or shall I say good poetry>> :-*
Re: Iqbal
readagain
05/15/03 at 01:35:01
[slm]
can i get a translation for this one..i LOVE this one..but im not smart enough to translate this in a REalllly nice way..okay here it goes:

Lazim hay dil ke saath rahay paasban-e-aqal
Lekin kabhi kabhi isay tanha bhi chor day...

(thanks)
Re: Iqbal
AyeshaZ
05/15/03 at 01:40:15
[quote author=readagain link=board=bookstore;num=1052577626;start=0#6 date=05/15/03 at 01:35:01] [slm]
can i get a translation for this one..i LOVE this one..but im not smart enough to translate this in a REalllly nice way..okay here it goes:

Lazim hay dil ke saath rahay paasban-e-aqal
Lekin kabhi kabhi isay tanha bhi chor day...

(thanks)[/quote]

heyy sana are you going to post some of your stuff aka
chivalrious heart  :-X
Re: Iqbal
jaihoon
05/15/03 at 15:19:48
[quote author=readagain link=board=bookstore;num=1052577626;start=0#6 date=05/15/03 at 01:35:01] [slm]
can i get a translation for this one..i LOVE this one..but im not smart enough to translate this in a REalllly nice way..okay here it goes:

Lazim hay dil ke saath rahay paasban-e-aqal
Lekin kabhi kabhi isay tanha bhi chor day...

(thanks)[/quote]

'Tis must for intellect to guard the heart
But at times do leave it alone to its own

This is in refrence to the philosophy that intelect or rational capacity has to stay guard or keep an eye on the emotions of man because ultimately satan can influence heart too. But do not be rigid over such a watch.

In Islam, both Intellect and heart comes under its rules, formulated by the Holy Prophet sallallahu alaihi wa sallam.

Hope that helps  :)
Re: Iqbal
Yasmeena
05/18/03 at 20:28:51
[slm]

These poems are beautiful.  Is there a site on-line where I can get more of these?

[wlm]

Yasmeena
Re: Iqbal
siddiqui
05/27/03 at 11:09:44
[slm]
First of all this is not Iqbaal  ;)
The other day a dear Friend and I were discussing missed opportunities in life in the form of poetry when he shared this couplet written by his uncle

Raza e-Rab pe Razi reh, yeh Hurf e Aarzoo kaisa;
Khuda Khaliq, Khuda Malik Khuda ka hukm to tu kaisa?

Be content with the will of Allah swt, Why this lament for missed opportunities

Allah swt is THE CREATOR , Allah swt is THE RULER,and if its the will of Allah swt,then  what are you (why this lament)
[wlm]




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