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Star Trek: The Medinat Al-Muslimeen Generation
Trustworthy
07/11/03 at 11:14:25
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There's been an ongoing idea on writing creative stories about this fun place of ours.  And Bhaloo inspired me to write one with his own story of some characters here.  You all inspired me as well.  I suggested a Star Trek Version of our own since so many of us are Trekkies (so to speak).  So I'm going to have a try at it.  I hope you enjoy and this is for everyone to add along as we continue on our mission to go where no man has gone before...ok so I'm corky like that.  Here goes...I hope I got this down right....

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Star Trek: The Madinat Al-Muslimeen Generation

[Scene one.  Act one. Aaaaaand ACTION!]

Counselor’s Log: Star date: 1424 Jumada Al-Awwal 11, 0606 hundred hours.

     This is ship’s counselor: 2nd Commanding Officer, Trust Worthy, of the Starship Madina.  We are on our way to the KarachiPak Galaxy to pick up a new Federation officer just graduated as an astounding and courageous pilot, Hansen Nomi who is also a relative of Madina’s own Analytical Officer, Bro Hanif.  On my way to start the day on the bridge with Captain Jannah, I decided to stop by the Bebzi Stand to checkout the welcoming party in preparation for the Hansen’s arrival and I meet Officer superFOB at the doors.

Officer superFOB:  Mornin’ counselor. [nods head and smile]
Counselor Trust:  Good morning to you super. [nods back in politeness]

[Bebzi Stand doors slide open.]  We stopped at the door to watch in amusement at the clatter that was going on.  As we stand wide eyed, WhiteSamoli, a visiting alien from the planet Canadia, and ambitious to become a Madina officer, walked our way.

WhiteSamoli [using hand and body gestures as he speaks]:  Dis crib iz phat en da pahtie iz gonna be jammin inda niiii’ite. Lez git it goin ohn!  Aye yo bro? Kewl dew.  

WhiteSamoli walks away.

SuperFOB [raises left eyebrow in confusion]:  I still cannot understand a word he said.  I swear he needs a translator at his side at all times.  [Turns to me] What in the heck did he just say?
Counselor Trust [grins]: If I’m not mistaken, I think he said, “This place is great and the party is going to be a blast tonight.  I’m excited.  I can’t wait.  Officer super? I like what you did with your hair.”  But my telepathic powers tell me that he was thinking ‘Odd color, your hair. Stupid humanoids.’  So what did you do with your hair?
SuperFOB: Like it?  I added a chemical agent known as brighteous-showus.  It brings a glowing effect to my hair.  It’s for the party tonight.  I want to impress Hansen Nomi.  You know?  Show him that this ship isn’t full of dull humanoids.
Counselor Trust: Sure.  It’s interesting.  I’m sure you’ll make quite an impression.
SuperFOB: I’m going to see if I can help out.  See you tonight.
Counselor Trust: See you super.

I look around and found Bro Hanif looking out at the galaxy pondering about Hansen Nomi’s arrival.

Counselor Trust: Good morning officer.
Bro Hanif: Hello Counselor.
Counselor Trust: Are you ok?
Bro Hanif: I’m sure you know the answer to that.
Counselor Trust:  It will help if you talk about it.
Bro Hanif:  I don’t know Counselor.  I’ve known Nomi since the day he was born.  Even at the Medic’s Facility, he was….ohhhh….how could I put it nicely?  He was a bit too exuberant.  I know he’s a good boy and he means well, but I just hope he doesn’t mess up around here.  
Counselor Trust:  You have no worries here Bro Hanif.  Hansen Nomi couldn’t ever possibly ruin your family’s name, only his own.
Bro Hanif:  You think so?
Counselor Trust: I know so.  You have quite a distinguished family and Nomi is part of that family.
Bro Hanif:  You’re right Counselor.  He is part of it and I’m sure he’ll do well here.  So are you coming tonight?
Counselor Trust: I wouldn’t miss it for the world.  Decorations looking superb.
Bro Hanif:  Thanks for the talk Counselor Trust.  See you tonight.
Counselor Trust:  Will do.

[I leave the Bebzi Stand and walk towards the bridge.]  On the way, I meet 1st Commanding Officer, Commander Bhaloo, known to the Captain as Number 1.

Bhaloo:  Have a good night Counselor?
Trust: Yes I did, thank you.
Bhaloo:  Having a good morning?
Trust: Splendid and yourself?
Bhaloo:  Couldn’t be better.

[Bridge door opens.]

Captain Jannah:  Glad to see that you two can join us on this delightful morning.

[The 3 of us sit down in our chairs.]

Trust: Wouldn’t miss it for the world, Captain.
Bhaloo:  Neither would I, sir.
Captain Jannah:  If we’re to make it in time to pick up Hansen Nomi at the KarachiPak Galaxy, we’re going to have to go at warp speed. [over the two way intercom] Abu Hamza, could you please send us to warp speed 2?
Abu Hamza: Thrusters are a go, Captain.
Captain Jannah: Engage. [points finger forward]


[We arrive hovering over Planet Karachi.]

Captain Jannah:  Welcoming committee?  Let’s go give our new member a warm welcome. [clicks communication piece (sorry don’t recall what they’re called)] Bhaloo?  Are you ready to meet us at Transporter 1 to welcome the new Graduate?
Bhaloo: Be right there Captain.
Captain Jannah [turns to Hansen Se7en at the pilot’s control]:  As soon as the teleport completes the transport of Hansen Nomi.  Take us out of orbit Se7en.
Se7en: Yes sir.

[We arrive at transporter 1.]

[Captain Jannah looking at Officer Bulwark.]

Captain Jannah: Bring him in, Officer.
Bulwark: I, I, Captain.

[Transporter phases in Hansen Nomi.]

Captain Jannah: Hansen Nomi.  Welcome to the….
Nomi [interrupts]: The Starship Madina.  Wow. [looks around in amazement]  I have dreamed about this for a long time.  [walks towards the Captain] You’re the infamous Captain Jannah.  It’s so glad to finally meet you. [salutes Captain in full stance] I’ve heard so many stories about you and your ship.  The great explorations and adventures.
Captain Jannah: Adventures?
Nomi:  It will be an enormous honor to be your pilot, Captain.  You must be Commander Bhaloo.  I’ve heard lots about you too always risking your life to save others.  And you, the beautiful Counselor Trust.  Part Betazoid, Humaniod, and Champa.  BrKhalid, the super warrior.  You could be my body guard any day.  Mystic, the other beauty of Madina known for her gentle soul.  And bhai Bhaloo, the whole family misses you, especially me.  It’s so good to be with you again [embraces Bhaloo].  It is a great privilege to be riding with you all.
Captain Jannah [laughing with delight]: Looks like he studied well.  I’m sure you’ll be a wonderful asset to our Starship.  Let’s all go to the Bebzi Stand and have a party.
Nomi: A party?  For moi?  I’m loving this already.

As we walk through the corridor towards the Bebzi Stand, the ship was hit by some unknown force and the yellow alert warning comes on. The Captain clicks the communication piece.

Captain Jannah:  Captain to the Bridge?  What’s going on?
Se7en: Captain, we’ve been hit by an unknown force.
Captain Jannah: On my way.  Sorry Hansen, looks like your party is going to have to wait.

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To be continued by the next inspired person.

I know it's not what you expected bhaloo (characterwise that is) but I had to be the star too, you know.  Enjoy!

Ma-asalaama.....
Re: Star Trek: The Medinat Al-Muslimeen Generation
Trustworthy
07/11/03 at 12:36:40
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PS...If anyone gets offensive of this, please forgive me.  It was unintentional.

Ma-asalaama.....
Re: Star Trek: The Medinat Al-Muslimeen Generation
WhiteSomali
07/11/03 at 16:27:44
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I like it, cuz mi was innit  ;D I ain knoe a tin about nuh star trek tho so I ain think I can write any part of it.

Ah well it dun matta, all fruits ripe!  []

[wlm]
Re: Star Trek: The Madinat Al-Muslimeen Generation
Trustworthy
07/11/03 at 16:51:29
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Well I was thinking that this story could go to a whole new level.  Now that everyone knows the main characters, if they aren't in it yet, to just add themselves.  Who'd better else to play their own part?  Kind of like an Add lib thing or a Mad Lib thing, you remember those books?  

Couldn't hurt to give it a try.  I think it'll be fun and quite hilarious.

You don't need to know anything about Star Trek, just play along.

Ma-asalaama....
Re: Star Trek: The Medinat Al-Muslimeen Generation
Tesseract
07/11/03 at 17:18:07
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        Interesting episode  :). I didn't even know I was also on this mission.......

        [quote]We are on our way to the KarachiPak Galaxy to pick up a new Federation officer just graduated as an astounding and courageous pilot, Hansen Nomi [/quote]

            Bro. Nomi is in LahorePak Galaxy, but anyways that ain't that far either, its just 2 (f)light hours away from KarachiPak Galaxy  ;).

Wassalam.
Re: Star Trek: The Medinat Al-Muslimeen Generation
bhaloo
07/11/03 at 23:02:16
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It should be ENSIGN not Hansen.   :D   Ensign is a rank in the military.  Interesting story though, I'll add to it a little later.
Re: Star Trek: The Medinat Al-Muslimeen Generation
Trustworthy
07/13/03 at 17:27:22
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He he he  :-/.  Thanks bhaloo.

Ma-asalaama....
Re: Star Trek: The Medinat Al-Muslimeen Generation
bhaloo
07/25/03 at 01:42:28
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Trustworthy, sorry, I tried writing something, but the quality was really pathetic, and I just deleted it, because it was not worthy to be put up here.


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