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| MY POEM titled --- "COLD RUN" |
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| Muna |
| 03/15/04 at 00:21:32 |
| Cold Run I keep running, but You keep on calling, I keep fighting but You keep on pushing, when I falter, You keep on watching, yo its getting cold, I can't feel my legs, I can hear You piercing my ears, but yo I ain't read yet, I failed you one to many times, I don't deserve You to be by my side, I left You standing alone countless times, I never knew You were always the one by my side, it took everyone to leave me for me to realise Your love, i can't breathe, I'm running out of air, drowning in my sweat, can't focus my thoughts, trying to understand how to open my heart, I have nothing, I am nothing, all i need is You again, I hear Your adhan and I stop running, I found home once again written and property of Muna Y. :) ^^^^^^^^^ asssalaamu-alaikum Everyone ... tell me what you think of my poem and critisizm is welcomed :) |
| 03/18/04 at 20:50:06 |
| Muna |
| Re: MY POEM titled --- "COLD RUN" |
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| theOriginal |
| 03/15/04 at 00:31:44 |
| [slm] free flow :) I like it a lot. Just capitalize the Y in the Yous :) Wasalaam. |
| Re: MY POEM titled --- "COLD RUN" |
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| Nomi |
| 03/15/04 at 02:36:32 |
| [slm] |
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